Patcoola's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mortal Kombat Monkey]

MK is back

ok audio,
sprites animation,
directing was ok,
overall movie needs more improving, sloppy in scenes,
looks rushed.

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[That wall]

it's alright

Good chose of music,
animation was smooth,
graphics could use one extra shade of color would make a big difference.

pretty good for a first submission.

[Visions 1/2]

prety good

this is the first time i've seen one of your works, and it's alot better than most people, you deferentially have a style and a system that is working for you. the size and length of your projects shows your dedication, although the detail of the art works could use improvement, the style and animation makes it worth watching. In the coming years i hope to see great things in your videos.

so far your strengths are in your story telling and speed; your style makes for the speed displaying that you know what your doing, which is very important since many people jump in without a style that they do well and works for them.

something that can be improved on is the art work, but don't put too much time into it, you'll learn how you can get a lot out of so very little. your animation is fine as it is, but as you experiment with tweens start with the simple idea of using tweens not to more objects from point A to B but to reuse things, latter when your tired from drawing, mastering shape tween will feel like flash animates itself. and just one more thing that is very important in flash animation graphic symbols are your friend.

the quality of the audio was poor due to the poor quality of the recordings, something to remember even with a professional mic is to talk at the mic not into it, take a step back and speak louder, setting the mic sensitivity higher will only add more noise.

you still have a lot to learn and flash is something you can spend your hole life mastering, but keep it quick and simple you have a good thing going here.

[Madness Redeemer]

beautiful

this was perfect, but i noticed some art off screen is showing on the edges of 2 scenes.

the audio is in stereo cool.

amazing work

[Madness Combat]

awesome

i love the guy dancing in the background the hole time.

[Souped-up Civic]

someone stoled my H

The graphics was plain and the background audio had to much rumble, i didn't like it at all, the sound effects was good. the car was missing the H in Honda on the back of the car till the last scene the H appears when hit by the train. also the train would most likely not to stop after hitting something. good try thou.

[Reading Rainbow 2]

getting weirder

i liked this one because it was funny.
this movie is better than the first and has animation, gooder drawin, and as always the dialog is it's strong point. this movie is weird and a good quick movie.

[Reading Rainbow 1]

*beep*

the drawings sucked, the effort lacks and it shows, the only thing good about this is the idea and audio, if you don't mind the beep sound, half the audio was beep. this movie looks like it was made in only 15minutes, but i have to say this movie is a classic.

[Scrotum 3]

dog killed by womans pimp

another improvement over the last one, but still no voice overs, and music was good as always, but i don't think austin powers music for the pimp was a good chose.

[Scrotum 2]

more dog killing

this movie is a big improvement over the first one and the music like the matrix (awesome), but reading isn't my thing, there was to many words and no voice overs, the killing of the dog was senseless and lame.